Reviews of 他死了，得到了一个强大的暴君系统
他死了，得到了一个强大的暴君系统
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This had the potential to be great. Which is why It's so annoying that the author executed the novel so poorly. Not only does the protagonist depend on modern technology for his power (in a medieval world) but the protagonist lacks depth. Depth in character can be excused, since characterisation takes time, but not even allowing the protagonist to make his own decisions is a bit too much. His system makes all the 'hard' decisions for him. This means that the protagonist never has a chance to grow, or express himself past his 'good guy persona.'
Although the guy with 1 stars review have the point about the system 'do all hard decision' for the mc too much that the mc can't decide on his own in the first 10 chapter, but after that it seem the author already rewrited ?, since chapter 13 we finally see more of mc own decision there and less 'helicoper parenting' by the system now. From how the author active in the comment and take feedback and the fact he plan to rewrite the first 10 chapter so those 'guided quest' should be more of 'hidden quest' to justify the needed reward better here. And from where the story heading I can see this novel become good there (and don't misunderstand this 'tyrant' as pure evil story, the mc are actually decent there and have his own moral, if you read the first few chapter you will see what I mean, include the comment when it explain about 'Tyrant' nature) I at chapter 13 now so will update this review more later (if there are even that option =.=!, so will just reply in review)
Not good at giving a proper review but I just do my part in getting the novel a rating so more will read it. This is a good novel if you are interested in dictators of the past and it seems the mc is taking heavy inspiration from a man with a funny mustache that is very angry, Novel at least what I have read is very nationalistic for this FICTIONAL country if that something you interested in reading about then it's probably not for you.
it's a pretty good and well thought out modern tech in a fantasy world trope. at the start you may think that the modern tech is too overpowered for the world, but as you keep reading. the author does a great job by buffing up the world's magic so that modern tech won't completely steam roll everything(ofcourse its still op, but not to the point of being boring). the Grammer is pretty good so far, some minor spelling mistakes. world background has developed to what is around the MC, so only the things the Reader has to be concerned about, and introducing some new new factions into the fray, around the chapter I wrote this review. update stability is excellent ,and the story is developing at a good pace , there is even some romance that actually advances. now for the mc, he doesn't start as a genius with 300 iq, he will need the systems help at the start since he deals with concepts he's not familiar with, like how industrialization works,etc. but later on he learns from the system and starts becoming less dependent on it, and so his IQ rises as he starts making his own logical decisions. overall this story is a very good and semi fast paced nation building story. would definitely recommend if you are not biased on ideology and are looking for some good nation building. (also, so far the mc only has one love interest and doesn't seem like someone who would be interested in a harem, so that's pretty good in my opinion. And logical since being a tyrant with a harem always leads to you being murdered by them)
