I'm sorry I really wanted to but I, I can't keep reading these. I love the concept of the story and most of it is pretty satisfying to read. as time goes by there are more and more pacing issues that, I have with it, which is making it unbearable read at this point. I am 441 chapters in and it feels like almost a couple of days went by in this novel a little more than a month. It didn't feel like almost anything significant happen even though I know the small significant things that did happen. It's extremely unsatisfying. It continues to wear and tear the more I continue to try to keep moving forward, thinking that something significant would change. My personal opinion I think this needs a rewrite, I very much enjoy the story, I think it's very good most of the time just feels like there are so many useless Parts in it.
Whispering Jianghu
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