Review Detail of User177785 in Soul of Searing Steel

I don’t mind the muscle headed part as its rather refreshing. But the arrogant attitude and the constant chunni talk during the fight is incredibly repulsive. Could you not have made it so generic? Could you not have made his personality so bland? Could you have made him into an actual battle maniac that loves fighting and shows it? The constant trash talk and remarks are what killed your novel when you could’ve had so many more readers and not the brainless trash that rate your novel 5 stars whilst you probably deleting the reviews that give you low star rating.