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Review Detail of InvicibleGod in The Divine Nine-Dragon Cauldron

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InvicibleGod
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i like your novel however there are many stuff that are making it bad and this makes me to want to drop the novel atleast for now 1.worldbackround very similar to other novels 2 story development is bad u just keep making everything bad every chapter there will be a hangclif and all the time you put the mc in the worst case scenario never 135c never did u give the mc a breath he always is on the losing end vs uncles daddys grandfathers greatgrandfathers grandmas and generaly ancestors he has 0 support nobody likes him im suprised by the second elder but even she cant do **** to support him she is even injured even her personal disciple doesnt like mc which is pure shiet if he had her support it would be much better 3 character design mc morals are horse**** yes the second elder helped him much and she sould get paid back hundredfold yes that other girl with the bow helped him A LOT and she should be paid for a lifetime i agree with those stuff he said BUT!!!!!! his father in law wanted to kill him and didnt just because he had good talent he wouldnt be in trouble in the first place if he didnt barge in with those stupid guards so i dont get his love for that guy. his fiancee xianer ONLY BRINGS HUUUUGE TROUBLE HUUUUGE TROUBLE AND EVEN MORE TROUBLE! thats all i think the fundation of the novel is bad and its not fixable because of the reasons above if in the future u still upload and i have seriously nothing to do and remeber this novel perhaps ill give it another try at that time

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The Divine Nine-Dragon Cauldron

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