It starts off decent. Lots of expected faceslapping. Has a lot of 'mysteries' that are supposedly 'answered' later on that eventually ruins the story. Yes. Ruin. You'd wish they were left as plot holes, instead of being resolved because they just screwed up the novel. Lots of additional characters. Lots of unnecessary character additions. Lots of back stories. And they didn't blend well enough. Eventually, in the later chapters (900+), you will wonder if you're still reading the same novel... whether this was the same novel with the initial story synopsis.
Jiong Jiong You Yao
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LIKEYeah, i agree. I wasted too much time in reading the raw. What I hate the most is someone’s death. What a way to die. He’s been told that he’s so stupid that he can die, and he’s really die stupidly. How can he drank something from stranger in the middle of family’s power struggles???!!! Don’t even let me rumbling about the supposed ‘main villain’. The last arc is really ruining the whole story.