Review Detail of milana_van_zyl in The Evil Consort Above An Evil King

the first few 100 chapters of the story are really thought out, but as the story progresses the writing becomes more clumsy and loses a bit of it's plot and storyline. it seems like the author has a lot of great ideas for the book and the desire to implement these ideas in the story made the author lose track of the storyline itself as the story seems to wonder off track quite a bit. Yet, it was still entertaining to read to some degree, however with some editing this book will definitely be able to become even a better story.