Review Detail of White_Jester in Monster Paradise

Dude, chill........I understand where you're coming from, but the sister can't go with him so wasn't it kind of obvious she wouldn't be there for the next few chapters? Also I don't think you've read on after the iron class exam, the characters get better and if you don't think so, just stop reading.

if a story needs 50+ chapters to 'git gud' then it's not a good story.

50+ chapters are nothing for a novel, this particular one is probably not even half way through and the latest chapter is 640. 50 chapters can be read withing some hours.

so what if it's nothing? 50 chapters is already good enough to critiuque a novel. So far the author had 1. Multiple cliches like cute little sister and no parents around 2. Zero personality inputted into main character 3. No motives for the MC 4. Deus Ex Machina in its literal sense 5. terrible story telling 6. multiple moments where characters are used to boost MC's massive epicness and some infinitive more reasons that people already told in other reviews.

1st: ok, so? 2nd: the MC was a random guy from "our" world with an unfullfilling life 3rd: his motives are described in the description of the novel, other than that he is basically in a "real life game" so there aren't any spectacular motives. 4th: he is technically in a game, that's how games work in order to be interesting 5th: that's in the eye of the beholder I think it's alright but that's just my opinion.

the motive is in the synopsis but no where in the novel is it stated or suggested and even unfulfilling guys have some ounce of personality, like they're lazy, submissive, and scummy. But nope, start of the Exam he acts ruthless in front of some people and then later on acts like some sort of heroic protagonist when faced with the hordes of monsters. Also, even if there's a lot of cliches, it's dumb that they do little with it. Like if the sister wasn't there, nothing would've changed in the plot by the point of chapter 55~ where i stopped. Or Fatty who helped very little in MC's Exam.

that's what everyone said about overgeared and look and behold, it's start to get good in 100-150 chapter later on

Overgeared wasn't bad at the start, what readers found insufferable was the MC's personality which was scummy, greedy, and incredibly pathetic in terns of behavior. However unlike MonsEvo, Grid (Overgeared MC) had a goal of becoming rich in-game to support his family with his newfound wealth. And you see the steps and progress he makes by the events that conspire. E.g. MC finally not needing to go to do dangerous construction work or obtaining enough money to pay off his family debt. Moreso, his actions are explained with his own reasoning, experience, and the author knowledge which makes us understand what he's ignorant of. This is miles better than, "I'll guess I'll be a monster tamer for no reason..." in this webnovel.

but Lin Huang reasoning for becoming monster tamer to become stronger,protect his sister and etc and also because his golden finger that allow him to summon monster that he kill(depend if he got complete monster card in a first try)