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Review Detail of BTNM in Omnipotent Sage

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This is the first review i wrote after i read a novel, but i just had to vent my opinions somewhere. The novel are great, a hidden gem but aren't recognized. First of all the story development are great, where everything doesn't revolve around MC. The world revolve with or without MC. It feels like a real world are described, and doens't feel forced. Stuff still happens without MC in the center of everything, and MC for once doesn't start something or goes around starting fights because he doesn't like the face of someone. There exists other people with their own schemes and ambitions, which affects the world around them, and in turn affects the surroundings of MC. And the fights are well done. They dont drag on for 5 chapters every fight, when experts fight it happens in a blink. most chapters last about 1-2 chapters, i was surprised myself when i read it, i thought i missed something so i went back to reread it. When fights dont unnecesarily drag on and on, the flow of the story gets much smoother. The only bad thing i felt were that the translation quality were quite bad. I can take some bad translation here and there, and some paragraphs which doens't feel right. But what is with the MC's name "junior leopard". What the hell, at least change the names to something else. And there are some more names which should be changed, and som editing would bring the story to a new level!!!

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