Review Detail of melvinmardi in Renegade Immortal

Beginning of this story was interesting and colourful but slowly the mc was starting to lack life, fully pursuing revenge . Nothing wrong with a cultivator mc taking revenge, On a demonic path and void of another emotions other than getting stronger or revenge... It's just feels lame to keep reading a person like that 😒 There are spelling and character addressing mistakes, the world background isn't clearly explained, the story development is good. Overall the writer did put a lot of effort in this story showing how cruel the cultivator world is ! Good effort I know the writer will get better overtime!