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The one part I don't like about this is the romance. The author didn't give us enough time with Delia for us to develop a connection with her. You can't just make her stay away for like 10 years, with barely anything about her for like 200 chapters, and then expect us to accept her just showing up, then them suddenly falling in love, and then getting married! That's not all though, though. The author makes it seem like she's someone who is in the novel to just comfort Linley when someone close to him either dies or breaks his heart, and then suddenly introducing her as a love interest while we know basically nothing about her, except she is a good mage from a good family. I know that I already said it, but that's 200+ chapters, and ten years in the novel with barely any mention of her, and then the Author reintroduces her as if we are expected to be happy about Linley marrying someone we barely know anything about! Maybe I'm the only one mad about this, but it actually annoys me, and is one of the reasons I stopped reading this novel.

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dima95
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xD you fool. Stoping for such a silly reason. u just lost the chance to enjoy a great journey.