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Paywalled. The story is really low quality in comparison to many of the other FREE novels out there. The writing style is really *******ish with its over use of sound effects. Every sentence is written as it’s own paragraph. The world building is lackluster. The interactions between characters - forced - and really only at the reading level of a elementary student. If youre gonna charge such prices for your story then it needs to be at a literary level worth the price. Humor is passable but strange at times since it’s based in another culture’s perspective. The translator could make a better effort at true translation - the art of representing words in context of the cultural and literal meanings of both languages. Translations are awkward. A native English speaker would never write in the same style, manner, or syntax. Overall, this story is NOT worth your spirit stones. Don’t bother and spend you time doing something more entertaining or of more value.