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This story is absolutely ****. The writer has no skill in writing. He does nothing but write mob characters that do nothing but talk trash. I can't read a single chapter where theres not a single mob not talking trash about the MC. I mean I've read a lot of underestimated MC and looking down on. But this is just straight up annoying. Makes me not want to read light novels. This series could be great but it's not. It's down right a piece of trash. I dnt know how you rate any thing but 1 star. Just means they don't have any class.

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I_Am_Immortal
I_Am_ImmortalLv4I_Am_Immortal

Its OK if u don't like it, but score 1 star is two much low. Every story has their own weakness and their strength, at least this novel is not like other novels which copy-pest almost all ideas. This novel introduced many new ideas which are very hard to get nowadays. Anyway I like reading this novel.

WhiteDragon32
WhiteDragon32Lv4WhiteDragon32

And on top of all of this it now has a 60 chapter $$$GIVE ME ALL YOUR MONEY$$$ paywall lol

muni1301
muni1301Lv13muni1301

I think this story is interesting and I really enjoy reading it.

maufriend567
maufriend567Lv6maufriend567

Now It has 90+ chapters asking $$$

WhiteDragon32:And on top of all of this it now has a 60 chapter $$$GIVE ME ALL YOUR MONEY$$$ paywall lol
HyperBlaze
HyperBlazeLv4HyperBlaze

Never get surprised about per view its how business works!

TechnoBlaze
TechnoBlazeLv4TechnoBlaze

the story gets better the more you read!

KathyL
KathyLLv4KathyL

It changes later btw there’s a point where everyone looks up to him

GldnApplImortality
GldnApplImortalityLv15GldnApplImortality

Dude where r u at man. Cuz later it becomes nothing but a gag novel for a long time. Dude ur way behind. Lol

KathyL:It changes later btw there’s a point where everyone looks up to him
Daoist836587
Daoist836587Lv1Daoist836587

My English is not very good, but I want to write a novel about western magic. Please help me evaluate it. Can you understand my brief introduction smoothly? ...... Please Introduction to this book: Here are magicians who can freeze rivers, paladins who can cut mountains with one sword, and golden titans who can tear dragons apart with both hands ... Here is the Holy Spirit continent, a world full of endless opportunities and dangers! I, Gavin Jones, with God's shop, am reincarnated here! Dragons' genes, magic spells to destroy cities, life-prolonging drugs, weapons to kill gods ... Everything will be mine! Of course, the beginning of everything starts from the day I became the tulip baron ...

GldnApplImortality
GldnApplImortalityLv15GldnApplImortality

Just have one question is this the defeated dragon novel?

Daoist836587:My English is not very good, but I want to write a novel about western magic. Please help me evaluate it. Can you understand my brief introduction smoothly? ...... Please Introduction to this book: Here are magicians who can freeze rivers, paladins who can cut mountains with one sword, and golden titans who can tear dragons apart with both hands ... Here is the Holy Spirit continent, a world full of endless opportunities and dangers! I, Gavin Jones, with God's shop, am reincarnated here! Dragons' genes, magic spells to destroy cities, life-prolonging drugs, weapons to kill gods ... Everything will be mine! Of course, the beginning of everything starts from the day I became the tulip baron ...