Review Detail of Panma in

Read up to ch104, and it has a pretty decent start, interesting world, and somewhat cool cheat. Yet the writing and MC that are OK in the beginning quickly turn to carp. The good / decent: 1. The side characters can be pretty funny and interesting. 2. The world and skill system themselves are OK-ish, but doesn't always fit with the "gene" thing. The bad: 1. a lot of "that person" when the villain is talking to some guy. Wooooo, so ominous. 2. Bunch of 'deus ex machina' where MC gets saved by something he did 'off screen' without any foreshadowing / hints. 3. Revenge plot. MC utterly destroys villain, but villain somehow has another trump card he hasn't used yet and survives just to get help and fights MC again, just to get destroyed once more. Generally quite generic revenge plot. + enemies pop up of nowhere, just to cause unnecessary trouble for MC. 4. Math, physics, chemistry and biology are all over the place, and it goes expecially out the window once he gets his first pet. 5. Lack of suspense. Kinda goes under 'deus ex machina', since when author or MC pulls wins the fight by something he did 'off camera' once (which happens quite often), the suspense in the next fights just dissappears. 6. MC is quite good in the start, but in later chapters he starts underestimating enemies and wastes so much time talking and throwing useless attacks. It has a good premise and world I guess, but the flat villain / revenge plot and MC that is unpredictable in a bad way just kills it for me. I'll continue reading because of the side characters, but it's going quite slowly... If you can endure the terrible writing / logic and speed read it, then props to you. 6/10