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Atryx10
Atryx10Lv135yrAtryx10

I've contemplated making this review for a couple days now. I usually rate fairly, as in how good translation, character, etc. was. But I can't do that for this novel. This novel has a 1 free chapter every 3 premium chapters release type. What this means is that if the story ends around chapter 2320, it'll have 1400 premium chapters (because premium started around chapter 220), that all cost between 10-24 spirit stones with an average of 14. Reason I bring this up is because it's about 2300 chapters and ongoing. What that means is that the story has to be worth that huge amount of money for us readers to spend on it. I thought it was kinda worth it up till this point. You see, a couple chapters ago, a person did something the MC couldn't do. Said thing is the thing that makes the MC stand out, because the MC is the only one that's supposed to be able to do this thanks to his "Xianxia-Boi Luck ". Because even though MC is more or less a monster in terms of power when compared to people in the best military academies, he couldn't even scratch the weakest point of a literally born seconds ago super-creature when the MC had all geno points other than super, as well as pobably all sacred buffs and gear that's available in the first sanctuary as well. Keep in mind that the brain is only slightly easier to damage than an eyeball, so if he couldn't even put a scratch on the newborn super creature, and it only got more powerful as the minutes ticked by, how is he supposed to hurt or even kill it even if its head was cracked open. However despite all this backstory to how powerful these supercreatures are, this one person killed an ***** super creature, that was injured, with the help of a couple hundred regular evolvers. Which is like you fighting an attack helicopter to the death, in an open field, whilst you have absolutely nothing but your own arms and legs, whilst the heli has 2 veteran pilots, 5 veteran gunners as well as infinite ammo, food, fuel and the heli won't experience wear or is affected by any weather. As you might understand, it is physically impossible to win such a fight. However, the writer decided that there was nothing wrong with the end result of this fight being you winning. The fact that the one who killed the super creature is a female also only means one thing, that they are basically the main love interest for this story and whatever person MC is currently together with will probably fade away in importance. Also, the MC appears to be monogamous, so i don't know how this has Harem tag. There's also the fact that the MC will start getting super geno points from fruit in the future as well. (I personally don't really care for how MC get's stronger, but I know that there's plotholes with this way of him getting stronger) So, with this information, are you willing to spend a couple hundred bucks on this story? I know I sure as **** don't. In fact, I want a refund of the 3400-5300 spirit stones that I've already spent on this story. P.S. when I write a review, it's because I've either finished the story or have lost all faith in the story fixing its mistakes, ie. given up on it.

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Super Gene

Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim

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Gremory
GremoryLv12Gremory

So I both agree with you and disagree. Does this story have major plot-holes, absolutely, is it annoying af, absolutely. This story needs an editor like a man in the desert needs water. That being said I am going to continue to read because the bear bones of this story are, in my opinion, quite good. Details should be changed, but this story does deserve to be 5th on the power ranking. Perhaps if I am super bored I'll make an edited version of it myself. Either way you get an upvote from me and a prayer that the author or translators will read this and pull their heads out of their asses.

Average_Human_Male
Average_Human_MaleLv2Average_Human_Male

Im pissing myself laughing over here, holy sh*t you literally couldnt be more wrong about EVERYTHING you said, if you wanna know why, just go and f*cking read it Also how is MC supposed to be the only one to EVER kill a Super Creature?? Humans evolve, adapt, in fact this whole novels point is that, broaden your mind fellow reader

Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

oh it seems he hasn't read that far, cuz if I remember correctly a few months or weeks after he gets to the next sanctuary another super creature gets killed in the first one

Average_Human_Male:Im pissing myself laughing over here, holy sh*t you literally couldnt be more wrong about EVERYTHING you said, if you wanna know why, just go and f*cking read it Also how is MC supposed to be the only one to EVER kill a Super Creature?? Humans evolve, adapt, in fact this whole novels point is that, broaden your mind fellow reader
Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

First of all Han Sen couldn't kill that baby, cuz he doesn't have any Super Points why does he need it? Apparently that baby is the baby of the strongest Super Creature in the First Sanctuary...

Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

Secondly others will of course eventually start being able to kill a Super Creature, why? Cuz the more people there are that has complete gene points below super, the higher the chances that they get to kill it. I mean, 100 people(that have 100 points for every gene except Super) versus 1 Super Creature and of course it isn't even the strongest so of course they'll win

Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

Thirdly, the female could've been the other person to beat a Super Creature for Equality or what not. I mean, I haven't even seen her(well I'm only around 600+ chaps in) appear again. Well aside from that, as I read the romance I feel that MC only loves one person and it's only harem cuz a lot of girls like him.

Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

Oh right, the fruits are from super creatures I believe

Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

Lastly, I don't really need to pay to continue reading (I just go to a different site to read this, don't ask where)