I'll make this review curt. Needless and random explanations, extending a basic scene to countless times the size they could be, and the repeated, constant, mindless writing about women. We're not an abstract creature from another realm. Please. Please just be human and stop obsessing over every single female in existence. It bleeds into the writing, making the story's already-drawn-out writing a hundred-fold worse, blanketing it in an immature light. Is this MC not some ancient person, having lived for 200 years and spent 10,000 years or so reading a scroll? Why does he sound like a desperate 16 year old?
Flying Alone
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