1. Character's personality. One word. Hoodlums. That is what I can think of to ALL of them even the main character. She is not any better in level of mentality with the villians. They are all about revenge, domination, being aggressive and aim for the kill without restraints. If they want it, they got to have it by hook or by crook. I don't hate revenge plots, but I expected that the main character at least have some kind of graceful and noble traits (usual expectations for hero characters). They are all egoistic psychopaths! 2. Character development. Terribly badly written. Like the time in chapter 12, when the main character challenged an elder pharmacist. She demanded an unfair bet conditions while she admittedly has absolutely zero knowledge with refining pills (base on chapter 9)! Let's get real. Even if she is an arrogant genius, she at least had to have a grasp of the basics of refining! All she did is throw a prescription base on her medicinal 'knowledge' (from her master a doctor which was mentioned on later chapters) to someone to make into a pill. A pill's effectiveness is base of the cultivator's skill. She didn't do any refining and then she won? BS! 3. Way of writing. It is a frigging INSTRUCTION MANUAL! Too mouthful. Many unecessary written details that goes in circles. Everytime something is being described, I feel I'm reading an instruction book than being told a story. It feels something 'like' this: [The villian comes running towards protagonist with a dagger.] Villian: [shouts] I'm going to kill you with my dagger! Protagonist: [screams] Ugh! Your dagger hit me. 4. Ease of reading... The first few chapters are HARD to read because of bad construction of words. It is like reading something from Google translation (which is bad). I tried to continue reading anyway, thinking that maybe the translation will get better. Unfortunately, it didn't. I skipped a lot of chapters. It just made me cringe forcing myself to keep on reading. Too many usage of exclaimation points, and it feels they are all shouting and screaming too much.
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