Pretty good start. Interesting premise. I like that the mc will have magic and physical prowess. Also realistic that after two years he can only produce a small fireball, I like that. We'll have to see where this goes.
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LIKEBradley:Whenever I see someone write realistic ... Like you did , it tells me ... Slow starting bad finish story . we read book NOT for things that make sense .. But for things that DON'T make sense