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The story started out nicely and was interesting but later on got more stale. Nevertheless, the idea behind the world and story is pretty good and the story development and world background could also be called okay-ish but what ruined these series (at least for me) are the POV changes that happen without any transition and separation simply mixing it all together and making the story unclear. Then there are the problems with some inconsistencies in the story where one name is changed for another in later chapters etc. not even mentioning the annoying grammatical errors and improper sentence structuring. Overall: It's a recommendation if you are looking for an interesting and enjoyable story, but not recommended if you can't get past the sudden POV changes, grammatical errors and messed up sentence structures (which don't get any better in later chapters).

Assassin's Chronicle

Hit the Southern Wall

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