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I'll just say that I understand why he's a 30yo virgin... Seriously there's 10 beautiful girls wanting to have a relationship with him and he spends most of his time cockblocking himself... wtf, the promise to Shika Kagura was the biggest bullshit reason to not date that I've ever seen... I feel that to get to a good ending this novel would have to have 2-3k chapters because things move so slowly; 400 chapters in and he didn't kiss any of the girls, didn't become a Yin Yang master and is still 15y.o (not even one year since he transmigrated...) At this point I feel like the author is regretting the fact that he made this novel a harem, he introduced 5000 girls and doesn't know how to make things work... If it's too forced it'll destroy the protagonists image and character that he's been creating for a long time, but considering his personality he's just not harem material... **: I didn't count the number of female leads, 5000 girls is obviously exaggeration. (Mika, Chiaki, Kaede, Purple Chick, Shop Manager 29yo girl (we all know that when an author gives the age, she's harem material), Twins, President, Vice-Pres, Maid, Ex-fat girl, Anime-sensei, Editor Girl, Little Sister, Littler little sister (maybe) and Ex-fat girl sister (maybe)) 13 couting only the ones that have more than 90% chance of being in the harem.
NEET Receives a Dating Sim System
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Att: I'm almost done reading (ch790). It takes a while for the plot o develop, there's too many elements introduced and in the last 100 chapter you can feel that the writting quality went down by a lot (useless POV's, cliche villain moments and bad naming for villains like wtf is Evil White Sakura God, for context there's a White Sakura God too.............). Anyway I feel like there's too many elements in this novel and the Author got lost in them, too many harem characters as well, but at the same time I like the way that Seiji's Girlfriends (Mika, Chiaki and Natsuya for now) were developed in this story, especially Chiaki, If this novel wasn't a harem Chiaki would definitly be my choice for a female lead. Kinda disappointed too that the novel had an interesting system, but the system side of the novel was never developed, the dating sim system in this novel is just the Deus ex machina of the protagonist, but it's a bad deus ex machina bcuz the author only uses like 10% of the system... 5 minute cards, instant cards, you never see any of these used. Therefore our NEET who receives a dating sim system isn't a story about a NEET who receives a dating sim system at all, it's closer to a playboy who pretends that he isn't a hero type, but in the end would probably sacrifice his life for any cat or dog that he finds in the street... That's it, the fights are kinda boring, system is bad, plot has been getting progressively worse, the only things that keep my attention are Chiaki and the proto-romance developed in these 800 chapters...