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yeti
yetiLv56yryeti

The grammar seems to be a bit off here and there and that makes it difficult to get into the story. Also the main characters thought process seems weird to me, I can't imagine doing any of the things he does if I was in the same situation.

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Cthulhu Gonfalon

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Noismaster
NoismasterLv6Noismaster

The translation quality gets better as the story progresses. MC intelligence and thought process improves from infancy to **** level. If I remember correctly, about chapter 25~30 it gets tolerable.

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amp323
amp323Lv13amp323

Qidian should get a Grammarly enterprise license for all their translators...

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Kailour
KailourLv6Kailour

Yeah almost all of the earlier chapters need to be rechecked.

laugher
laugherLv5laugher

Actually this novel used to be in webnovel but some time ago they stopped updating it Actually it isn't that great of a story And the world building is pretty limited since while reading it I felt like the story is happening in a dark world Plus it s weird for webnovel to drop a novel than bring it as if it s something new

laugher
laugherLv5laugher

Actually this novel used to be in webnovel but some time ago they stopped updating it Actually it isn't that great of a story And the world building is pretty limited since while reading it I felt like the story is happening in a dark world Plus it s weird for webnovel to drop a novel than bring it as if it s something new

TheMothMan
TheMothManLv5TheMothMan

Ooh i remember this one seen it 2 years ago on a pirate website wait.... This comment is from 2 years ago so it was on this site once

Abu_Rafasya
Abu_RafasyaLv4Abu_Rafasya

ok

Noismaster:The translation quality gets better as the story progresses. MC intelligence and thought process improves from infancy to **** level. If I remember correctly, about chapter 25~30 it gets tolerable.
Dvaita
DvaitaLv5Dvaita

That's actually something like a legal business practice and Qidian knows nothing about legality except for sending Cease and Desist letterers against actually good translators and plagiarizing their work

amp323:Qidian should get a Grammarly enterprise license for all their translators...
doast23
doast23Lv4doast23

just so cliche whit the "evil god " and "good god" that a redflag of an 50iq author no one is realy evil in fantasy setting and the mc is "good man" more like stupid naive and wuss

laugher:Actually this novel used to be in webnovel but some time ago they stopped updating it Actually it isn't that great of a story And the world building is pretty limited since while reading it I felt like the story is happening in a dark world Plus it s weird for webnovel to drop a novel than bring it as if it s something new
thedeadtellstories
thedeadtellstoriesLv5thedeadtellstories

Thanks, you're saving my time 😂

laugher:Actually this novel used to be in webnovel but some time ago they stopped updating it Actually it isn't that great of a story And the world building is pretty limited since while reading it I felt like the story is happening in a dark world Plus it s weird for webnovel to drop a novel than bring it as if it s something new
Taoist_Ouroboros
Taoist_OuroborosLv11Taoist_Ouroboros

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Fg8w82
Fg8w82Lv4Fg8w82

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Azmie5045
Azmie5045Lv4Azmie5045

Awesome

Azmie5045
Azmie5045Lv4Azmie5045

Awesome

PinkDlower
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1nick1
1nick1Lv41nick1

your critique provides absolutely no constructive reasoning. are you just here to whine?

doast23:just so cliche whit the "evil god " and "good god" that a redflag of an 50iq author no one is realy evil in fantasy setting and the mc is "good man" more like stupid naive and wuss