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For Story Development - As at chp 445, I'd like to say this. Picture a snail moving on a leaf, now reduce the speed by about 79%, THAT'S how slow the book is. I find myself skipping chapters of "epic" fights that remind me of dragon ball z and I kinda hope it get better but at this point, I desperately want to drop. The writing quality is okay, I guess. There's nothing mindblowing or unique about it compared to other novels Character design, as usual nothing unique apart from the double innate which brings no added benefit to the character but I hear there's plot armour coming soon. so maybe it'll get better? World development? Where? I'm trying to see it but maybe it's early chapters but I see no world development at this point

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