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AzureWolf
AzureWolfLv56yrAzureWolf

The thing I hate most is how the MC still acts human even though hes a monster now and has none of the Instincts of one either. Whats the point of the MC turning into a monster when he uses it every 200 or so chapters... I was really hoping he would give into his beast instincts and use it much more often. There is hardly any MC monster novels and the only reason i started reading was someone told me that he abandoned his human form later and became an ancient monster. Once he does become one he reverts back to human... What the hell is the point of him becoming one? this pisses me off. Human fighting other Humans in novels is starting to become so over used. there needs to be more mix ups. The best way to fix this is easy. THIS IS A VAST UNIVERSE BUT EVERYONE IS HUMAN WTF.

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NouH
NouHLv3NouH

I have to agree with you on that, i read 250+ chapters and its starting to piss me off already, everything is so convenient for the MC, everything just happens at the right time and with such a big coincidence that its stupid, not only that but seems like the author don't put too much effort in solving a problem the hard way, everything has to be convenient for the mc like, ''Oh mc needs to get strong fast, but oh wait, that ruin he just entered has a extremelly rare metal that even the strongest warriors on the universe would kill to get it from him, what a LUCKY CHANCE 1 in 154154426451 trillion, the mc is so lucky WOW, AI is impressed'' and then comes his cold bi*ch wife that just gives 0 f**ks about her kids and her husband sacrifice for his family and just straight out kills herself because, F**k the children, they can grow up without a father and a mother, and then not only that but then there's the MC with has bs reaction to it like AI - MC your wife just committed suicide MC - What you gotta be kidding me AI - But wait, i actually gave her master necklace that can SAVE her from any harm and turn her into a eternal spirit immortal regenerating body with infinite lifespam, WOW, SO INCREDIBLE< SUCH COINCIDENCES, Master such is generous MC - (His reaction right after knowing his wife committed suicide but was revived because of a magic item) Oh, that's cool, good. And then his wife is like, '' What i tried to commit suicide how am i alive, how cares about the children i only want my husbando *See's message from MC*, OMG he is alive, and then everything proceeds like she never tried to commit suicide or that wasn't even a big deal like wtf.

NouH
NouHLv3NouH

Sorry for grammar errors, i was really pissed with the story when i wrote this, also i hope you don't mind the long post.

AzureWolf
AzureWolfLv5AzureWolf

Haha I don't mind. I quite enjoyed reading your post.

NouH:Sorry for grammar errors, i was really pissed with the story when i wrote this, also i hope you don't mind the long post.
Ravelord
RavelordLv5Ravelord

He has enough willpower to resist those instincts, it's clearly stated that they are there, he's just that sturdy in mentality. It's explained in later chapters, universe is vast but he's in human 'camp', who would you expect to see more often if not humans? Again, in later chapters he's seeing less and less humans because he's not quite in human territory

WhiteDragon32
WhiteDragon32Lv4WhiteDragon32

I say the same thing as they do.

Ravelord:He has enough willpower to resist those instincts, it's clearly stated that they are there, he's just that sturdy in mentality. It's explained in later chapters, universe is vast but he's in human 'camp', who would you expect to see more often if not humans? Again, in later chapters he's seeing less and less humans because he's not quite in human territory
WhiteDragon32
WhiteDragon32Lv4WhiteDragon32

It was never free! They have always been making money off of us from us viewing their AD's at the bottom of the chapters and watching their Ad's to release the chapter for viewing. It is just that they now want us to also fork out $30+ a month to read these chapters on top of all the AD's money they make off of us as well. Just pointing out that we never were getting it for free, but at least we didn't have to fork out money out of our own pockets before.

Ravelord:He has enough willpower to resist those instincts, it's clearly stated that they are there, he's just that sturdy in mentality. It's explained in later chapters, universe is vast but he's in human 'camp', who would you expect to see more often if not humans? Again, in later chapters he's seeing less and less humans because he's not quite in human territory
Mad_Bear
Mad_BearLv4Mad_Bear

1) He doesn't 'turn into a monster'. His soul is human but his body IS a monster. 2) He wishes to hide that secret, so he rarely uses the space-beast body. He only uses it when he's absolutely sure that there is no other method and that he will kill everyone, 3) He became a monster not because he wanted to, but because if he didn't, the space-ceast would have destroyed Earth and everyone living on it. He didn't abandon his original human body as the first thing he did when he becme the Golden Horned Spacebeast was to recreate his human body. 4) A spacebeast is not an ancient monster. It is neither 'ancient' nor is it technically a 'monster'. 5) Not everyone is human. There are six races in the universe that can be called 'supreme'. Humanity is one of them. The MC is a human. He lives in the human domain. Most lifeforms in the human domain are human. There are other races in the human domain that are subordinate to and vassals of the human race, but they are a minority that will live in there own secluded regions. 6) He doesn't truly give in to the nature of the beast because a) his soul is still human, so his human personality has greater power of his bestial instincts, and b) the beast is only actually savage when it is in battle or intends to battle, which we see quite clearly in the MC (his slaughter of millions when he was cracking down on the criminal cartel). Thus, everything you have said is wrong and you clearly haven't read the story properly.

Esthos
EsthosLv13Esthos

Well it is a vast universe but humans only take up a portion of it. In the novel there are other races such as the automatons, bug race and other races that are equally as powerful as the human race. Furthermore it is already explained in the novel that his mental fortitude can be counted as the top 3 on earth thus enabling him to resist his beastial nature. It is also further elaborated later in the novel that the human race on earth was specifically designed to have a strong mental power by a peak level existence. On top of that if he were to give in to the beastial instincts, the novel would have ended early on with earth getting wiped out or at least most residents and races in the human territory getting wiped out as well. And getting lucky chances are part and parcel of being the mc of a novel so it makes sense for him the get them furthermore there have been times where he failed. Human versus humans are seen in every cultivation novel literally no matter what genre. Plus in the battlefield, humans are not allowed to kill each other when in the army as they have to fight against other races. And why humans in the novel are dominants is because of their high reproductive ability enabling the human race to have a large population, this also applies to other novels and in real life. If you want a novel where humans are not the dominant species and where humans are not as much go and read martial world after some 1000 chapters the human race starts to fight a loosing war against another race where humans are the species with a substantially smaller population as compared to other races in the universe

Esthos
EsthosLv13Esthos

So next time flame with and actual reason

StaticNight9
StaticNight9Lv4StaticNight9

Yes I agree with you

Mad_Bear:1) He doesn't 'turn into a monster'. His soul is human but his body IS a monster. 2) He wishes to hide that secret, so he rarely uses the space-beast body. He only uses it when he's absolutely sure that there is no other method and that he will kill everyone, 3) He became a monster not because he wanted to, but because if he didn't, the space-ceast would have destroyed Earth and everyone living on it. He didn't abandon his original human body as the first thing he did when he becme the Golden Horned Spacebeast was to recreate his human body. 4) A spacebeast is not an ancient monster. It is neither 'ancient' nor is it technically a 'monster'. 5) Not everyone is human. There are six races in the universe that can be called 'supreme'. Humanity is one of them. The MC is a human. He lives in the human domain. Most lifeforms in the human domain are human. There are other races in the human domain that are subordinate to and vassals of the human race, but they are a minority that will live in there own secluded regions. 6) He doesn't truly give in to the nature of the beast because a) his soul is still human, so his human personality has greater power of his bestial instincts, and b) the beast is only actually savage when it is in battle or intends to battle, which we see quite clearly in the MC (his slaughter of millions when he was cracking down on the criminal cartel). Thus, everything you have said is wrong and you clearly haven't read the story properly.
StaticNight9
StaticNight9Lv4StaticNight9

Think, a soul if human, a flesh of a beast. Just that.

MilordInk
MilordInkLv13MilordInk

Body of a monster, soul of a man.

FunFun
FunFunLv4FunFun

Don't know how far into the novel you are but if you catch up you'll realize that there rarely are such co-incidences and even when they happen its because he's lived long enough that if there weren't co-incidences along the way it'd be weird.

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FunFun
FunFunLv4FunFun

Its back and its in full swing so far.

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Mad_Bear
Mad_BearLv4Mad_Bear

Do elaborate please

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YourDestiny
YourDestinyLv11YourDestiny

This was quite entertaining, thanks

NouH:I have to agree with you on that, i read 250+ chapters and its starting to piss me off already, everything is so convenient for the MC, everything just happens at the right time and with such a big coincidence that its stupid, not only that but seems like the author don't put too much effort in solving a problem the hard way, everything has to be convenient for the mc like, ''Oh mc needs to get strong fast, but oh wait, that ruin he just entered has a extremelly rare metal that even the strongest warriors on the universe would kill to get it from him, what a LUCKY CHANCE 1 in 154154426451 trillion, the mc is so lucky WOW, AI is impressed'' and then comes his cold bi*ch wife that just gives 0 f**ks about her kids and her husband sacrifice for his family and just straight out kills herself because, F**k the children, they can grow up without a father and a mother, and then not only that but then there's the MC with has bs reaction to it like AI - MC your wife just committed suicide MC - What you gotta be kidding me AI - But wait, i actually gave her master necklace that can SAVE her from any harm and turn her into a eternal spirit immortal regenerating body with infinite lifespam, WOW, SO INCREDIBLE< SUCH COINCIDENCES, Master such is generous MC - (His reaction right after knowing his wife committed suicide but was revived because of a magic item) Oh, that's cool, good. And then his wife is like, '' What i tried to commit suicide how am i alive, how cares about the children i only want my husbando *See's message from MC*, OMG he is alive, and then everything proceeds like she never tried to commit suicide or that wasn't even a big deal like wtf.
FunFun
FunFunLv4FunFun

I would say no, if he needs something to happen it usually doesn't, and he needs to go risk his life for it, and even then sometimes he doesn't get what he wanted. I really recommend this tho, came to qidian only for this.

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Mad_Bear
Mad_BearLv4Mad_Bear

Examples please? It's been a while.

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kumadam
kumadamLv6kumadam

Having kids in a story usually ruins the story for me especially when the mc is the type where they borderline or cross the mentally challenged hypocrites line. Or even those that are somehow very caring and won’t leave the people they care about but rather spends time getting stronger to protect them, and to do that, he has to abandon them. Everything just seems halfhearted what it’s frustrating, especially when they tried to justify their actions when there’s no real reason behind it because they have to make the mc look “good”. But be honest, is this worth reading? I caught up with most of my novels and some became really frustrating to read and I need a “fresh” or just a new journey. Please help me :’)

NouH:I have to agree with you on that, i read 250+ chapters and its starting to piss me off already, everything is so convenient for the MC, everything just happens at the right time and with such a big coincidence that its stupid, not only that but seems like the author don't put too much effort in solving a problem the hard way, everything has to be convenient for the mc like, ''Oh mc needs to get strong fast, but oh wait, that ruin he just entered has a extremelly rare metal that even the strongest warriors on the universe would kill to get it from him, what a LUCKY CHANCE 1 in 154154426451 trillion, the mc is so lucky WOW, AI is impressed'' and then comes his cold bi*ch wife that just gives 0 f**ks about her kids and her husband sacrifice for his family and just straight out kills herself because, F**k the children, they can grow up without a father and a mother, and then not only that but then there's the MC with has bs reaction to it like AI - MC your wife just committed suicide MC - What you gotta be kidding me AI - But wait, i actually gave her master necklace that can SAVE her from any harm and turn her into a eternal spirit immortal regenerating body with infinite lifespam, WOW, SO INCREDIBLE< SUCH COINCIDENCES, Master such is generous MC - (His reaction right after knowing his wife committed suicide but was revived because of a magic item) Oh, that's cool, good. And then his wife is like, '' What i tried to commit suicide how am i alive, how cares about the children i only want my husbando *See's message from MC*, OMG he is alive, and then everything proceeds like she never tried to commit suicide or that wasn't even a big deal like wtf.
Anonymreader
AnonymreaderLv5Anonymreader

So... what do you define as hard work? Luck is essential part for any MC, he won't be MC if he is unlucky. He isn't the most lucky MC I read about nor is he the most unlucky. There are three things a MC needs to progress: luck, determination and .

NouH:I have to agree with you on that, i read 250+ chapters and its starting to piss me off already, everything is so convenient for the MC, everything just happens at the right time and with such a big coincidence that its stupid, not only that but seems like the author don't put too much effort in solving a problem the hard way, everything has to be convenient for the mc like, ''Oh mc needs to get strong fast, but oh wait, that ruin he just entered has a extremelly rare metal that even the strongest warriors on the universe would kill to get it from him, what a LUCKY CHANCE 1 in 154154426451 trillion, the mc is so lucky WOW, AI is impressed'' and then comes his cold bi*ch wife that just gives 0 f**ks about her kids and her husband sacrifice for his family and just straight out kills herself because, F**k the children, they can grow up without a father and a mother, and then not only that but then there's the MC with has bs reaction to it like AI - MC your wife just committed suicide MC - What you gotta be kidding me AI - But wait, i actually gave her master necklace that can SAVE her from any harm and turn her into a eternal spirit immortal regenerating body with infinite lifespam, WOW, SO INCREDIBLE< SUCH COINCIDENCES, Master such is generous MC - (His reaction right after knowing his wife committed suicide but was revived because of a magic item) Oh, that's cool, good. And then his wife is like, '' What i tried to commit suicide how am i alive, how cares about the children i only want my husbando *See's message from MC*, OMG he is alive, and then everything proceeds like she never tried to commit suicide or that wasn't even a big deal like wtf.