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Review Detail of JerDan09 in I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World

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JerDan09
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I disagree with the other reviewers. First, it doesn't have any world-building at all. This post apocalyptic world is simply ripped off from games and other post-apocalyptic/scifi stories. Second, it's not even fun as a light read because you'll probably just skim over several paragraphs of pointless conversations or descriptions that are tedious and condescending. It's as if the author thinks the reader is so incredibly stupid, and has no imagination that they needed to explicitly describe things, events or every single irrelevant action such as closing a door in the story. I seriously could not understand why people like this stupid novel. But then again, stupid people read stupid things. There is so much racist/supremacist undertone in this novel that serves nothing more than self-gratifying fantasies the author has. I just have to wonder if the author was educated at all, or have ever experienced socializing with people from another race/country. There was a lot of narrow-minded thinking and generalization in this novel that I personally do not find acceptable at all. I personally didn't find any fulfilment or satisfaction at all in reading the chapters. The conversations feel clunky/unnatural, the pace was tedious, and everything that's happening feel as if they are inconsequential in the end (like it didn't matter anyway if this and that happened, filler chapters). Because all it amounts to is just to prolong the story. It is garbage/trash read. Something you read in the toilet just to pass the time. It doesn't make you think or even imagine. It's formula is to intrigue the reader, and sandwich useless, unnecessary things between that and the story progress. Seriously, it's as if the author just writes all the crap he/she can come up with just to stall the progress of the plot.

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ArtistaFeel
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wanna try something new? try this "Lyricist: Her Revenge" I'm sure you'll love it

icefire96
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de una...yo lei el manga y me lleve una decepcion.