Review Detail of GianP in Castle of Black Iron
Review detail
Still fine for first... 200 chapters? I loved the idea, the incipit of the story: an artificial subspace for yourself, which helps you grow in streghts and has lots of potential for even political or military situations. Perfect. Then the sh*tstorm began. At first, it was a with fine dropplets of p!ss. I call it the "yellow festival" or "yellow rain". Because it's showering praises about chinese stuff... Name whatever you want: body, mind, technology, food, etc... They have it better. Bigger empires, bloodlines etc. But that was only the beginning. The real gross natural phenomenon began when the MC went from "perverted but still somewhat respectful pubescent boy" to "rapist without remorse" without a single reason. I'm not exaggerating here. He actually tried to stick his thing inside her thing without her consent, while she wildly tryied to free herself. What. The. Actual. F**k. It's not only the rape that greatly disturbs me. It's the total "I dont give a single f**k" about character development or actual reason. Also, the story was just slowly becoming worse so that finally made me drop it. Do you have a functionally brain? Do you have a gram of self respect? Don't start reading this. You will feel disgusted and sorry for the waste of potential of this story.
Castle of Black Iron
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I agree that the rape thing was not cool, but that was only one incident compared to the rest. Yes, the novel is quite vulgar but I’m sure that the author had a large whiplash from that and learned from his mistakes. I would say give this light novel another shot. Rape is rape. It shouldn’t be allowed or glorified, but this novel is still pretty damn good.
Also liked that one at first.... Then the MC started brainwashing the insect moster, the plant girl... Everyone. The real problem for me was altering the consciousness of even his servants and friends. That not only destroyed any difficulty (the point of the story was conquering a world of strenght with money and commerce) but also was pretty wrong from a moral point of view.
Unknown47:If you like the premise try ‘bringing the farm to live in another world’
GianP:Also liked that one at first.... Then the MC started brainwashing the insect moster, the plant girl... Everyone. The real problem for me was altering the consciousness of even his servants and friends. That not only destroyed any difficulty (the point of the story was conquering a world of strenght with money and commerce) but also was pretty wrong from a moral point of view.
That rape attempt, yes that would be where he ****ed up, but considering how sex hungry he is and how beautiful she was... it was no wonder he tried it, plus it showed his character very well. As a man who had sex with every women he showed interest in except for his teacher it is kinda expected to become arrogant in that regard and act like an arse.