Review Detail of YesEvil in Battle Frenzy

I've read this from start to finish and it is quite the ride for good and bad. As the book is complete you have nothing to fear in terms of updates. Basic quality of writing is abysmal for the first half of the book and a serious edit would do a world of good for the novel. The latter half of the book is in good nick. The savior of the first half of the book was the competent story, whilst not infallible, it was interesting enough to keep me reading. The unfortunate part is that whilst the writing quality improves in the second half, the story degrades quite severely. The second half is rushed and has been poorly planned by the author. Many things are taken in leaps and others are forgotten before being shrugged off later in a side note. Having just finished the book not even an hour ago I can confidently convey my disappointment for a book that promised much more. I hope that someone re-writes this one day as it could be so much greater than.... this. Is it worth a read? Give it a go. Is it worth finishing? Probably not.