Review Detail of nnyobzns in Strongest Abandoned Son

So, I needed to get this off my chest. First I am truly enjoying this novel, and am thankful the translator and editor. That being said, I would like to suggest that they spend some time reading English literature. Preferably modern speculative fiction, and make note of sentence structure and word usage. That should help them to understand how the English language is used. I say that based on the assumption that neither is a native English speaker. If my assumption is incorrect, then I am truly disappointed in the two of them. I could only suggest they return to high school and not leave until they pass high school lvl language arts. I know this is kind of harsh to hear, but I am reading three novels by goose 5 and this translation really gets to me at times. For the potential readers of this novel, it is legible and can be understood easily. It is simply tranlated at the equivalent of an American elementary school 4th grader (approximately. 9 to 10 yo reading lvl).