Review Detail of Exodian in The Wizard World

A somewhat above average Chinese translation - while translator clearly isn't professional and has no literature background, at least it's good enough to not second guess the content, despite still making the reader suffer thru quite a few blunders every chapter. The story itself, however, is less than exemplary. Author has ideas, but that's all he got. Characters are shallow, dialogues are boring, combat scenes mostly make no sense (which hints at poor visual imagination of their creator). Bullshit like successfully blocking a chain by a sword is just the very beginning of obvious problems in that department. If you can visualize well what you read, you are probably not going to enjoy this therefore. In general, there are huge logic problems within this plot. If I were to compare this story to WMW, this one would have a minor score for originality, while WMW would have major plot and logic scores.