Review Detail of SickBlad in The Wizard World

The story has a great idea (the reason WotMW effective stole it) but the author is terrible. 1. Dialogue between characters is terrible, feels like what a 5 year old would say. 2. Author is inconstant with anything. Time to get somewhere? Changes Age of MC? Changes 3. The fights (chapter 84-88) horrible, the fight made no sense and was horribly written. 4. Zero logic and intelligence. Characters don’t act right at all. 4.1. The spells the MC chose were useless in the fight, yet he still manages a draw against a fully trained stage 3 apprentice... like how? The stun spell did nothing just filled space and the hand spell needs direct contact to work.... who is going to slap, with their hand, their opponent in a fight? 5. Pacing. The author has no idea how to properly pace the story, we spent like 10? 5? Chapters on the MAGIC SCHOOL. One of the most import parts of the story was massively rushed. 6. Poor translation/editing. The story has many grammatical errors in it, those may be accurate translations or the editor couldn’t be asked. This is bearable but along side poor dialogue and no logic the story’s got too painful to continue reading. Don’t bother with this, just read WotMW and be done with this plot.