Review Detail of WaterPanda in Realms In The Firmament

Translation is alright. There are some inconsistencies here and there, and the various instances of the use of “too” in a negative sentence. The story starts out really nice and interesting until around 1-200 chapters in when the MC makes some questionable decisions and his intelligence seems to drop nonstop. Somehow miracles happen and he always survives and feels good about himself. That is still not too bad, but then author starts writing like some horny teenager, and every girl becomes our MC’s love interest. The author spends a lot of time describing how much of a virgin the MC is and how he touches sensitive parts of all the coincidentally virgin girls. I stopped reading after the author introduces x ray vision for our MC and makes him see the supposedly “6 year old in a 18 year old body but is actually 1000 year old” naked. It feels like the author gives up after 200 chapters and just lets someone else write the novel.