Review Detail of Yakumo in Library of Heaven's Path
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The story is sooo repetitive, always the same schema. 1st there is a problem, 2nd there is MC which everyone thinks of as an incapable fraud who cannot solve the problem, 3rd MC enrages the others even more, 4th MC slaps faces of enraged people by cheating with his library to solve the problem. Repeat this several times with different characters, settings and occupations, that's all till chapter 270... Characters are really shallow, even the MC lacks personality. He has a greedy personality, likes to slap faces and loves to teach his students. Other than that he lacks natural talent and is only omnipotent because of his cheating library, which is kinda sad. That's basically all you can say about him and no real characterdevelopment happened so far. The characters capabilities grow, but only because of his cheatcode and not because of experiences. The world and characters/animals lack descriptions. Often new characters/beasts and so on are only introduced with 1-2 sentences, so it's hard to get to love those faceless characters and plain settings. Certain parts of the story are lacking any logic. Sometimes the omnipotent MC deduces things so detailed, that I wonder why the surrounding characters didn't straight away burn him on the stakes because of witchcraft, but they just accept it with pale faces... Other times the timeline is totally messed up. Until chapter 270, 20 days passed and in this time he read millions of books, but if you run some numbers with #books read and time needed to flip a book, there is no way that could be right. TLDR: repetitive story with shallow characters/world and illogical parts.
Library of Heaven's Path
Heng Sao Tian Ya
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RTW is my favorite! Lovable characters, great story with plot twists and great world building. Everything is described to the last detail, so that you can even draw a detailed map of the world in your brain or imagine the distinctive look of every single character, beast and demon. Whereas here are just rough mentions like 'kingdom xy is 10000 miles away' or 'howling firmament beast looks similar to viriscent eagle, but bigger', which is really sad. Aside from RTW, Coiling Dragon is also great, but doesn't get much attention anymore, since it's long finished
lazyass:my thoughts exactly. Try reading "release the witch" ,demon's diary (slow but awesome ,never repetitive and great plot twist , and the mc does not have anythig apart from brains , even the villains have brains and not just arrogant idiots ), monarch of evernight
Yakumo:RTW is my favorite! Lovable characters, great story with plot twists and great world building. Everything is described to the last detail, so that you can even draw a detailed map of the world in your brain or imagine the distinctive look of every single character, beast and demon. Whereas here are just rough mentions like 'kingdom xy is 10000 miles away' or 'howling firmament beast looks similar to viriscent eagle, but bigger', which is really sad. Aside from RTW, Coiling Dragon is also great, but doesn't get much attention anymore, since it's long finished
Coiling Dragon the life of Linley, from his childhood until *****hood (>100years). He is a member of a once great clan, which is now near its extinction, which he wants to prevent and lead the clan to glory again. After some time he finds an old unseeming ring, but which in reality a powerful artifact and contains the soul of a once powerful mage 'grandpa Doehring' and so his journey begins. He will find great companions (humans and beasts) on his journey and on his way to revive his clan he will have to solve other subgoals and releals more and more about the real history of his clan. But his journey doesn't stop with his initial goal and he travels with his wife and friends to other worlds linked via gates. Since the story spans over more than a hundred years, it doesn't feel that hurried like e.g. library. He doesn't have an omnipotent system, except grandpa Doehring who guides him a little bit in the beginning, but not later on. Linley has great talent from the very beginning, but only got discovered due to Doehring. He is more the type who works hard and gets breakthroughts due to his own effort (sometimes several years needed), which is really satisfying. It has a nice romance plot incl own family development. Character development is great and the story is really entertaining with exciting but also sad parts and plot twists. Descriptions are really detailed like in RTW, so you can totally immerse yourself. Imo definitely worth a read. The ending felt a bit rushed, but everything prior is great.
lazyass:i havent read coiling dragon what is it about i dont wanna start another boring novel
The world of Coiling Dragons contains magic and martial arts and typical beasts derived from normal animals, but also dragons and other fantastical beasts. Sry for spelling errors...it's hard to type on phone ^^
Yakumo:Coiling Dragon the life of Linley, from his childhood until *****hood (>100years). He is a member of a once great clan, which is now near its extinction, which he wants to prevent and lead the clan to glory again. After some time he finds an old unseeming ring, but which in reality a powerful artifact and contains the soul of a once powerful mage 'grandpa Doehring' and so his journey begins. He will find great companions (humans and beasts) on his journey and on his way to revive his clan he will have to solve other subgoals and releals more and more about the real history of his clan. But his journey doesn't stop with his initial goal and he travels with his wife and friends to other worlds linked via gates. Since the story spans over more than a hundred years, it doesn't feel that hurried like e.g. library. He doesn't have an omnipotent system, except grandpa Doehring who guides him a little bit in the beginning, but not later on. Linley has great talent from the very beginning, but only got discovered due to Doehring. He is more the type who works hard and gets breakthroughts due to his own effort (sometimes several years needed), which is really satisfying. It has a nice romance plot incl own family development. Character development is great and the story is really entertaining with exciting but also sad parts and plot twists. Descriptions are really detailed like in RTW, so you can totally immerse yourself. Imo definitely worth a read. The ending felt a bit rushed, but everything prior is great.
read "A Record of a Mortals Journey to Immortality" if u don't want cheat codes, the best novel for anti cheats... MC name is HanLi that Doesn't have : Aptitude - he learns SLOW Face/look - he's average Sect - none, he's just a nomad Parents - they're just mortals Luck - lol he have the worst, all the teacher/master who wants him to be their disciple have ulterior motives and wants him dead , he even needs to reset his cultivation NOT just ONCE just to have a higher chance on advancing his cultivation bottleneck ... The only problem on ARMJI is that he's below average that he's so slow learning things and cultivating that's why a lot doesn't like the novel but for me it just made me like it more hehe... the story is just like the title it self ARMJI~
