Review Detail of Pizz001 in Once Upon A Time, There Was A Spirit Sword Mountain

OK this is my 2nd review of this great work , i stand by my 1st comments but can also say as the storyline in evoloing it's getting better to be honest i 1st picket this up due to the anime / manga so i'm alittle a head in some places in reguards to the work , but still the novel is loads better , their are some bit's as they say lost in translation like some of the chaptor titles which could upset somepeople in the westen market , but i ask just look past that and enjoy the work