Review Detail of Emmanuel_Capricorn in Marvel: False God - Avatar of Ogdoad

I've read the older version and it was a good read but definitely sub par compared to master4th wall's other book, with MC I didn't like - which is hard cause I like Amon from your Skypein fanfic - and uninteresting abilities for the MC. But with this rewrite, I am expecting a great change and a Master4th wall standard. Anywho, with the existing chapters and based on my knowledge of the Author and the old version of this book, let's be the first review. Writing quality : 5 out of 5 no drama. Master forth wall has great writing skills and versatile english words to capture the essence of the story. He is the type of writer to describe backgrounds in great detail and someone who occasion used sentence masterfully stitched together. Though my problem is that the writing can sometimes be tiring to read and I hate it when he use it to increase word count with minimal plot. Also, his writing can sometimes come off too professional these days and I miss the fun narration from old masters book. But that can be just because his stories has been going in 3rd POV recently. Unlike me who used really simple English, expect an intermediate level of english with almost impeccable grammar and Punctuation. It is godly compared to what you you would mostly find in web novel. Character Design : Five out of five no drama. MC is always interesting and likeable in most cases except for their shared intrest in women. He also has the talent to create Ai pics for each of his characters so it greatly helps in imagination.Author has great ability of distinguishing characters and he writes female characters really well. He has written much so no complain in this regard. Updating stability : 4 out of 5 it's fair game. Master rarely drop a book and have competed multiple books. But he has the habit of writing three or sometimes even more books one at a time sotti that slow down his updating time. But always expect at least 2 chaptees a week for him with his normal being 4 chapters a week. It can be daily if we reach the power stone deal. World Background : 10 out of 5. This is a tricky question because it's a fanfic but all in all, the author show great ability in bringing out the original world building in his books. And he has built up his own Ominversal universe and stuff with all his books being connected with each other so definitely above almost every other fic. All in all, a must read to all traveling readers. be warned and read the tag though. And his books is power fantasy self insert type of thing. Like solo leveling. Is not the book italef but the genre that might turn you off even if you don't end up liking. Here's to one of my favourite author.