Review Detail of Korkyros in The Third Life of Maximus

Thank you so much for your feedback! I appreciate you taking the time to read my story and share your thoughts. I understand your concerns about the pacing and the retelling elements. The initial chapters are intended to establish the protagonist's early experiences and lay a solid foundation for his character development. The story is designed to follow a gradual, weak-to-strong progression, where certain situations will eventually connect him to his past and lead to the discovery of his powers. Regarding the Marvel involvement, it's coming soon! I wanted to make sure the premise and the protagonist's backstory were well-established before diving into the Marvel universe. I believe this approach will make the eventual introduction of superpowers and Marvel elements more impactful and meaningful. I appreciate your patience and hope you'll continue to follow the story as it evolves. Your feedback is invaluable, and I'll keep it in mind as I move forward. Thank you again for your support!