i read four chapters for now but i don't think i need to read more to write this review (even if i will still read this fic) everything is good and the only problem is that there's too much grammatical error and some sentences don't make sense because it was just translated word for word instead of rewritten, so yeah it's hard to understand what's going on but from what i understood the story is very good. (also i didn't understand the 5 unit thing because in Dragon ball a unit is the power level but then it says that he has trillion of power level while having 5 units 🤷)
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