Review Detail of MyCalamity in Divine Trials

I won't say much about the story itself, if you enjoy this book you'll find out as you read. However, I do feel the need to inform any would be readers that this is my first time writing a novel, and thus you shouldn't expect it to be the greatest. I'm still learning and it'd be incredibly helpful if I could receive advice and critique on my novel. I implore you to please take the time out of your day to tell me what about my novel you like and dislike, and what I could do better in the future.