Well this is a very good story, l haven't gone deeper but l am intrigued by the plot and the journey of the story, but l think u should like make less characters, wat l mean is if u pump too much info about the names of characters readers will easily forget and it would just confuse us like the guardians it will take quite some time to know all of their names and l think u should have brought them in slowly for a deeper impact, but its good you have a deep understanding of your novel and would love it if u published more đ
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