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Item: The Cursed Heiress Strikes Back
Rating: 4

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jyuni_hassLv46djyuni_hass

the usual writing errors right from the start.. it's an abrupt introduction with a confusing backstory..one paragraph said kieran is her first past rejected mate and another paragraph said he's currently rejecting her at the altar? 🤔

The Cursed Heiress Strikes Back

IceQueen21

Liked it!

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IceQueen21AuthorIceQueen21

You should take your time to read it again and point out the errors. Read again and you will see that Keiran is not her first mate. Thanks for the review 👍

jyuni_hassLv4jyuni_hass

yeah, my bad I got confused because both pack names are quite similar - silver moon & blood moon 😅

IceQueen21:You should take your time to read it again and point out the errors. Read again and you will see that Keiran is not her first mate. Thanks for the review 👍

IceQueen21AuthorIceQueen21

Alright, Jyuni. hoping to see more of your comments as the book progresses

jyuni_hass:yeah, my bad I got confused because both pack names are quite similar - silver moon & blood moon 😅