This is more of a crack fic than anything else. The story development is pretty shallow and the mc to say the least is dull and robotic for someone with a template based off Higuruma (one of the most well written and dynamic character in the series) youd expect the mc to be somewhat entertaining but he just comes off super hollow and empty when compared to authors desperate need to make higuruma as overpowered as he can (even if most of the time the powers given don’t make any sense within the parameters of the jjk power system) The writing quality is mediocre and the grammar is lacking whilst the dialogue is as mechanical as the MC and his internal thoughts
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LIKEat least he tried to make this story better by rewriting it... I think it's quite better than the previous version
Honoured_Writer:It had 10 chapters before this. Author deleted them all after my review
MSS_LAMBDA:Bro only has one chapter 😭 And most of your points are immediately Nullified by that very thing.
Honoured_Writer:It had 10 chapters before this. Author deleted them all after my review