Review Detail of Defective_Angel in journey to multiverse a tensura fanfic

5stars just for appreciation... (1). this story is very hard/hurt to read, there are to many inconsistency about conversation writing, sometime they used like "example" sometime MC: example and mostly always used [MC said, example....] (2). the story line is exact copy of OG novel with a little SI. (3). the whole chapter is a complete CHAOS, even if you familiar with tensura story line you will be got stroke with this.... (4). this comment was written after I read chap4, and the author mentioned the real story will start after siizue-arc which mean we need to re-read the [destroyed version of tensura LN]