Review Detail of Jackleell in journey to multiverse a tensura fanfic

Item: journey to multiverse a tensura fanfic
Rating: 2.6

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JackleellLv116dJackleell

I couldn't get past the first chapter even though I would like to read this novel. My head hurts from reading it. You know, there are a lot of tools out there to help with writing if your English isn't good, like Grammarly if you want to write by yourself, or ChatGPT to fix errors, etc. And the systems are stupid. Why would anyone want a system? I'm starting to get annoyed with all these system novels. Some are good, but people don't have the imagination to create their own skills for their characters and just copy-paste skills from every anime, movie, etc. It's so boring.

journey to multiverse a tensura fanfic

Aditya_Sharma_6664

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Aditya_Sharma_6664AuthorAditya_Sharma_6664

Well my system only give access to information and battle simulator. it also help in protection from higher beings. travel to another world and body change. < it seems you get annoyed with system >

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Aditya_Sharma_6664AuthorAditya_Sharma_6664

but anyway. Thank you for your suggestion. as for system. May be you are right. there is no need for system in tensura..

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JackleellLv1Jackleell

I don't really care much for the system, even though it annoys me. However, I would suggest that you rewrite the chapters. I would enjoy this book very much because English is my third language, but the one I've spoken most in my life. It hurts my head reading the first few chapters."

Aditya_Sharma_6664:but anyway. Thank you for your suggestion. as for system. May be you are right. there is no need for system in tensura..

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