Review Detail of sm43576 in I Have An Alien Mining Ship

Item: I Have An Alien Mining Ship
Rating: 1.6

Review detail

sm43576Lv423dsm43576

It has potential but really need to touch up on editing like separating it out into sections. Really kills me with the one blob of text per chapter

Cardinal_Sin

Liked it!

Cardinal_SinAuthorCardinal_Sin

i edited the whole chapter but when uploading to webnovel it fucks up the whole thing

16d

Emmanuel_1_ALv14Emmanuel_1_A

Where r you getting the raw bro

21d