Review Detail of Lion_Comet in Marvel/Xmen:Yuta Okkotsu

It was doing soo well.. Then the mc became Too predictable and greedy. You copied JEEAAAANNNN!!!!!!! I mean Jean's power. You could have, I don't know use telekinesis to get the blood samples instead of attacking the Previously-men during the Sentinel invasion. B-b-but anon he hasn't trained using telekinesis yet. then git good. Also Rouge getting a Copy of MC's power then begins to explain all of the current powers of the MC was the last nail to the coffin and it's only been 6 chapters in