Review Detail of TempestDrift in Marvel/Xmen:Yuta Okkotsu

The writing is good and some-what bad in that the author tends to only write the "action" scenes and everything else is just summarized with internal monologue. So it's a 3-4 out of 5, the Grammer is OK though as in I haven't seen any egregious misspellings. The thing with the Quotations is bothering me though. I'm only surface level on Marvel lore in that I have seen the MCU movies and the older pre-MCU, Foxes X-men and Raimis Spider-man. So nothing from me on that front. JJK on the other hand I know about, so Yuta not having Rika at first is abit weird, Rika is bound to Yuta. Also Sukunas CT is not called "Cleave & Dismantle" it's called "Shrine" C&D are a small part of it. As of chapter 2 he should know RCT because of Rika. The Cursed Dimension is a good way to include Curses and Cursed energy into Marvel though so props to that. Despite the criticisms I look forward to more, take it with a grain of salt P.S. I want more of a Despresso-Espresso MC because y'know Yuta a depressed boi.