Review Detail of unknown_daoist in One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock

Item: One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock
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unknown_daoistLv1412dunknown_daoist

Its the wirst of MTL, just blatantly lying with saying "fixed granmar" - there is no fixed grammar, just your typical MTL what makes it unreadable... probably just to promote his patreon - greedy author

One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock

Uchicha_Remant

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Uchicha_RemantAuthorUchicha_Remant

It's my first time writing. If you find some unreadable paragraphs or chapters then comment on chapter or paragraph. I assure you to fix it. Thanks for the review.

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