Overall story has potential but i like to add some flaws first Mc is too dependent on stimulation which does not make any surprise element cultured scene are not detailed in that regard development is must needed secondly Mc power attribute enhancement should improve by killing zombie interaction and some leisur time should be given to mc and female leads to develope their relationship outside fellow humans struggle should be explored and thier interaction with our main character it's all i think you should focus on story is gradually developing and i wish you good luck 🤞
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