Review Detail of monke6 in Red Nara

Item: Red Nara
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

monke6Lv41mthmonke6

the story's probably one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read on this app but the problem is that the constant amount of grammar mistakes make it worse and ruin the immersion like they call the nine tails kurama, call root "ne", calling the MCs mum the wrong name and just swapping words around. author please proof read your chapters before you post them

Red Nara

l_legolas

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DimastrelokLv2Dimastrelok

Well, this is all most likely due to the translation, since I know the original source of this work)

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0Klein_amon0Lv20Klein_amon0

Nine tails name is kurama...

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monke6Lv4monke6

the only people who know that before naruto is the other tail beats and the sage of six paths, but hiruzens just casually calling him kurama and noone else is wondering whos he talking about?

0Klein_amon0:Nine tails name is kurama...

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0Klein_amon0Lv20Klein_amon0

Oh that's what you meant Yeah that's kinda weird

monke6:the only people who know that before naruto is the other tail beats and the sage of six paths, but hiruzens just casually calling him kurama and noone else is wondering whos he talking about?

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