Review Detail of Orions in HP: In The Magical World As An Extra

Before i tell you what i think of this Fanfic please note that there is only 7chapters at the time of writing this review. //\\There isn't really any translation since nothing can tell me that's one. -He updates everyday so 5/5. (Even if i know it's hard.) //\\The reason why i assign 4/5 to "Story Development"/"Character Design"/"World Background" is because all the 7 chapters are a copy of the fanfiction called "Harry Potter: Lost Son" (you can look for it on webnovel). While yes, it has been edited to be more... pleasing to read. //\\//\\ But it doesn't change the fact that the first few chapter are... well copy pasted with some editing and that's it. No change in the way the character speak or the response, nothing. //\\//\\ It's only in the last chapter 7, that the end of the chapter doesn't end the same way as the original version. So i hope the author will make the story more distinct than the "Lost Son" fanfic. //\\//\\ But Hey, it doesn't change the fact that the story is good. It would have been good if the author would have warned about it in the description of the story or at the beginning of the story.