Review Detail of Rodel_Selasor in The_Awakened_

Item: The_Awakened_
Rating: 4

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Rodel_SelasorLv11mthRodel_Selasor

The story development is kinda nice and the writing quality too but i don't really like the way they talk, but overall it's good if you don't mind it like i do, cause I've read many books before and the only thing im not quite satisfied is the way they talk

The_Awakened_

Paradox1507

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Paradox1507AuthorParadox1507

hey! thank you for reading my first-ever review. What is it about the way they talk that you do not like? I will try to re-write accordingly. :))

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Rodel_SelasorLv1Rodel_Selasor

First review btw before it gets famous [img=Feeling it]

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Rodel_SelasorLv1Rodel_Selasor

I'm not too sure it's just that every novel I've read follows a certain dialogue but yours is different but I can't seem to find what's wrong with it, it's just that my intuition tells me that the dialogues are different from all the novels I've read that's all, but you don't need to cater it to my liking cause you're the author.

Paradox1507:hey! thank you for reading my first-ever review. What is it about the way they talk that you do not like? I will try to re-write accordingly. :))