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Just for encourage you at continueing your story, not gonna lie you have so many potential to the story and if you don't mind tell me how are you going to expand the world? Do your pokemon world mimics the real world or still in pokemon? Let me get the answer, but if you don't find this insteresting then okay, but if you manage to find this review then can you tell me what is going to be hyped here. -14Yo Student

Pokemon: A new world of adventures

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wow incredible coincidence :0

Vacasal_Remaster:the name of my story's main character is Rita. Brouh, that is crazy
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Thanks for the support :) As for expanding the world, my biggest inspirations for creating this fic were (A random pokemon journey, Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures, Renegade Jenny (Pokemon Fanfic), Pokemon: Master of tactics, Borne of Caution). I think that's why you can already see a little of how I want to follow the story. But I don't want to make a kill or be killed Pokemon world, I want to make one with some realism but still enjoy the magic of the Pokemon world. An example of this is Charlie's first conversation with Rita, in this story the minimum level of education someone has to have to pursue any career involving Pokemon is High school, because I think that should be the absolute minimum for someone to be able to mess with animals magicians with the potential to become the equivalent of living nuclear bombs. I'll even give a little spoiler >:) This potential to be a nuclear bomb thing? It's because I intend to make the pokemons a little similar to the beasts and animals from some cultivation and medieval magic world novels. Pokemon are a strange mixture of matter and energy (aura), and the stronger a Pokemon is, the more energy it is made of. I took Naruto's Bijus as an example of this, because they are 'simply' a gigantic accumulation of living chakra in the shape of a beast. The legendary and mythical are the most extreme examples of this in the pokemon world, with some of them representing concepts from the world itself and existence. Another thing too, the path I'm imagining for Charlie is for her to become a pokemon researcher with some training stuff in between, because let's be honest, being a pokemon trainer is almost half the reason why pokemon stories are interesting. Thanks again for your support ;)

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the name of my story's main character is Rita. Brouh, that is crazy

MatheusMaruj0:Thanks for the support :) As for expanding the world, my biggest inspirations for creating this fic were (A random pokemon journey, Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures, Renegade Jenny (Pokemon Fanfic), Pokemon: Master of tactics, Borne of Caution). I think that's why you can already see a little of how I want to follow the story. But I don't want to make a kill or be killed Pokemon world, I want to make one with some realism but still enjoy the magic of the Pokemon world. An example of this is Charlie's first conversation with Rita, in this story the minimum level of education someone has to have to pursue any career involving Pokemon is High school, because I think that should be the absolute minimum for someone to be able to mess with animals magicians with the potential to become the equivalent of living nuclear bombs. I'll even give a little spoiler >:) This potential to be a nuclear bomb thing? It's because I intend to make the pokemons a little similar to the beasts and animals from some cultivation and medieval magic world novels. Pokemon are a strange mixture of matter and energy (aura), and the stronger a Pokemon is, the more energy it is made of. I took Naruto's Bijus as an example of this, because they are 'simply' a gigantic accumulation of living chakra in the shape of a beast. The legendary and mythical are the most extreme examples of this in the pokemon world, with some of them representing concepts from the world itself and existence. Another thing too, the path I'm imagining for Charlie is for her to become a pokemon researcher with some training stuff in between, because let's be honest, being a pokemon trainer is almost half the reason why pokemon stories are interesting. Thanks again for your support ;)
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yup ikr then you should add an event where all people want the prize so much, i mean story event that being said the interesting one, think for a good one? Honestly i have no idea considering my pokemon world story is "huge" so i don't really know how to make you inspired. Maybe that's it? -i just realized that i am still 13Yo boy, bruh.

MatheusMaruj0:wow incredible coincidence :0