You should try putting more grammar and action but I must say the novel was so awesome and we need to know more about the other princess, and like what my likes doing like her hobby or something like that, also how they war came about like the war the four kingdoms were fighting we need to know how the war came around like what made Auron Start a war because he can't just weak up one morning and start a war there must be a story behind the war But in all this you really did good 😊 I love for that keep it up 💪
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